How to Line Edit a Short Story! | Line Editing Your Work #2

Line Editing Your Work #1:    • How to Line Edit | Editing Your Writing #1!   TIMESTAMPS: 0:00 - Intro 2:12 - Excerpt #1: immediacy, image clarity, verbs, strong vs weak similes 13:55 - Excerpt #2: POV/situation/dialogue clarity, imagery 18:10 - Excerpt #3: showing vs telling, sentence structure, condensing constructions 22:51 - Excerpt #4: image logic and structure, character psychology →BLM petitions, donations, and resources (updating list): https://blacklivesmatters.carrd.co / https://blacklivesmattercanada.carrd.co →Anti-Racism Resource Guide: https://allyresourceguide.com →Issues in the World (updating): https://issuesintheworld.carrd.co MY SHORT FICTION: ☾I Will Never Tell You This - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/never-tel... ☾Solarium - Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-b... ☾Barefoot - The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282 ☾Wishbone - PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/pr... ☾Wishbone - video reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282 ☾Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden - The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/cherry-an... ☾Hold Me Under Till I See the Light - The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-ti... ☾Beautiful Animal - Room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine MORE WRITING TIPS:    • Writing Tips   WRITING VLOGS:    • Writing Vlogs   WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS:    • Writing & Authortube Discussions   BOOK REVIEWS:    • Recent Reads   Check out more writing and publishing videos from me over @Reedsy!:    / @reedsy   OUTRO MUSIC: "l u v t e a [acoustic]" by Autumn Keys SOCIAL Tumblr:   / shaelinwrites   Ask me anything: http://shaelinwrites.tumblr.com/ask Twitter:   / shaelinbishop   Instagram:   / shaelinbishop   Goodreads:   / shaelin-bishop