✍️ editing my subscribers’ first chapters

hello! today we're going to edit three of my subscribers' first chapters. i want to give a big shout-out once again to Jamie, Tionge, and Ebony, as well as every single person (all 43!) who submitted pitches and their excerpts! This video could not have happened without y'all, and I can't wait to make another one along these lines. thank you for watching :) ✨ timestamps: 0:00 - opening 0:05 - intro, what we're doing today, and disclosures/caveats 4:07 - excerpt #1 - romantic Greek tragedy 15:52 - excerpt #2 - historical fantasy 22:44 - excerpt #3 - epic fantasy 29:26 - outro ✨ kris' most recent editing video:    • a guide to editing & polishing your scenes...   ✨ music: Free Music for Videos 👉 Music by Lohfi - Dream Forest - https://thmatc.co/?l=97C25DCF ✨ links: 🇵🇸 STAY INFORMED/DONATE: https://savepalestine.carrd.co instagram (personal): https://www.instagram.com/lynndjung/?... website: https://lynndjung.com/​​​​​​ travel writings: https://wherethehellami.blog ✨ my published writing: "The Fall of Esther Park" via Apparition Lit: https://apparitionlit.com/the-fall-of... "Eulogy for a Muse" via The Icarus Writing Collective: https://www.icaruswritingcollective.c... ✨ contact me/business inquiries: [email protected] ✨ tags: booktube, authortube writing, writer, author, writing craft, story craft, storytelling craft, how to write a book, how to write a story, new writer advice, new writer tips, writing help, writing advice, writing tips, speculative fiction, f novel writing, revising a book, revising a ya fantasy book, fiction writing, fiction editing, editing YOUR writing, writing excerpts, craft chat, traditional publishing, going on submission, writing lessons, helpful writing advice, story structure, writerly advice, reading my book to you, book writing help, editing your book, editing a book, edit a book, revise a story, revise a book with me, write with me, edit with me, first chapters, developmental editing, querying help, querying advice, prepping a book for querying, revisions, revising, editing, editing services, editorial services, revising writing, writing revisions, how to do revisions, how to edit, how to developmentally edit, how to edit a story, how to edit a first chapter, editing a first chapter, editing an opening, write a good opening, write a good story