Let's Edit! Ep. #1: Fixing a Boring Scene YA Fantasy

Let's edit a scene together! Several people have asked what I mean by "glue" holding the paragraph together. I forgot to mention that I have a video that goes over writing strong paragraphs as well as two videos on writing strong descriptions. Sorry about that! These videos give an in-depth explanation of most of the concepts I'm applying in this video. Writing stronger paragraphs:    • 5 Ways to Write Better Paragraphs (for cre...   Writing stronger descriptions part 1:    • 5 Ways to Write Better Descriptions for Cr...   Writing stronger descriptions part 2:    • 5 MORE Ways to Write Better Descriptions i...   Support our volunteer Cabrielle Holden Instagram: @cabrielleholden Website: www.cabrielleholden.com Support me on Patreon:   / ellenbrock