9 Plot Mistakes Every New Fantasy Writer Makes

I've edited a lot of fantasy novels this year - here's the most common plot mistakes I find. 1️⃣ Want more help with your writing? Read my new book, 'Plotting Your Fantasy Novel' → https://jedherne.com/plotting-your-fa... 2️⃣ Want to work with me personally? Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp → https://jedherne.com/outline ⏲️ TIMESTAMPS: 00:00 - Introduction 00:35 - Beating the antagonist too early 02:13 - Repetitive scene formats 04:01 - Passive protagonist 05:20 - Weak throughline 08:15 - Soggy middle 13:56 - Weak consequences 15:00 - Misaligning the 3 Ps 15:52 - The peter-out ending 17:36 - Lucky breaks for the protagonist ✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK: Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': https://jedherne.com/lessons 🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS: Join my Easy Writing Habits course: https://easywritinghabits.com/ 💌 MY NEWSLETTER: Get a free fantasy story when you sign up to my free, fortnightly author newsletter: https://bit.ly/jednewsletter 📙 MY BOOKS: Across the Broken Stars: https://jedherne.com/acrossthebrokens... The Thunder Heist: https://jedherne.com/thethunderheist/ Fires of the Dead: https://jedherne.com/firesofthedead 🎮 MY VIDEO GAME: Siege of Treboulain: https://www.choiceofgames.com/siege-o... 🔨 MY FAVOURITE WRITING TOOLS: Freewrite Traveller (distraction-free writing laptop): https://getfreewrite.com/?rstr=6485 - use this affiliate link for a 5% discount. MailerLite (best email newsletter software for authors): https://www.mailerlite.com/a/awmq7yim... ProWritingAid (editing software that helped a lot with my early books): https://prowritingaid.com/?afid=4301 🧑 ABOUT ME: Hi! My name's Jed. I'm a fantasy author with three published novels and a bestselling video game. On this channel, I draw from my 10+ years of writing experience to help you become a better writer. 💬 CONNECT WITH ME: Follow me on Instagram:   / jedherne   Send me an email: jed(at)jedherne.com (Note: I don't always get a chance to reply to every email. However, I do my best to read as many of them as possible, and it's my preferred method of communication.)