Editing YOUR College Essays | How to Write a Successful Common App Essay

Want to work with us? Schedule a FREE intro meeting today: https://www.elevated.school/getstarte... Here we go again! In this vid, I edit and rate two more of YOUR common app essays! Be sure to watch all the way through because the essay mistakes I'm seeing are happening to seniors all over the world (not just these ones)! Thanks for trusting me with your work! If you're curious to know when we'll be doing something like this again, be sure to subscribe and keep an eye out on our community posts where we announce (which is where we announce when we'll be doing free edits again!) Next time I plan to review some supplementals and UC essays! #collegeadmissions #ivyleague #yale #yaleuniversity #commonapplication #howtogetintotheivyleague #elevatedschool #kevinzhen #kevinzhensei #jeffreyyu #collegeessay #collegeessaytips #collegeessayhack #commonapp #applyingtocollege #collegeapps #collegeapplications Time Stamps 0:00 Intro 1:01 Common App Essay #1: Spikeball and Human Trafficking 10:06 Break! 10:40 Common App Essay #2: Sheldon Cooper and the Big Bang Theory! 16:56 IF YOU LEARN ANYTHING TODAY!!! 17:15 Rating Your Essays 18:15 A Heartwarming Closing #collegeadmissions #ivyleague #yale #yaleuniversity #commonapplication #howtogetintotheivyleague #elevatedschool #kevinzhen #kevinzhensei #jeffreyyu #collegeessay #collegeessaytips #collegeessayhack #commonapp #applyingtocollege #collegeapps #collegeapplications ABOUT US Hi! We're Kevin and Jeffrey, two Yalies who want to help you get into your dream school! About Kevin Zhen: Exeter '16, Yale '20 (East Asian Studies) Since 2016, Kevin has personally helped more than 50+ students gain acceptances into every Ivy League University, as well as top tech schools such as Stanford and Georgia Tech. He also loves teaching creative nonfiction, flash fiction and poetry. In total, his students have won more than 120+ Scholastic Writing awards. About Jeffrey Yu: Yale '23 (Computer Science and East Asian Studies) Jeff is a senior at Yale double majoring in Computer Science and East Asian Studies with a concentration on China. His college admissions essay was featured in the New York Times, and he specializes in essay writing, college admissions strategy, and life coaching. He has served as a Student Ambassador to the Yale Admissions Office, written extensively about college admissions on Quora and has taught courses on motivation, passion, and leadership while sponsored by the US Embassy in Tokyo. LINKS Website ► https://www.elevated.school/getstarte... MORE CONTENT How to get into an Ivy League College 2022 [playlist] ► bit.ly/ivyzhensei Common Application Essay ►    • The Emo Common App Essay That Got Me Into ...   Yale Supplemental Essays ►    • Revealing my MUNDANE Yale Supplements | Ke...   Viewing Yale Admissions File ►    • SHOCKED at my Yale Admissions File | The T...   Interviewing Friends in College ► https://bit.ly/collegewinterviews MUSIC CREDITS ♪ Affogato (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - affogato   ♪ Alone (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - alone   ♪ Bake a Pie (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - bake a pie   ♪ Branch (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - branch   ♪ Butter (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - butter   ♪ Chocolate (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - chocolate   ♪ Highball (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - highball   ♪ Home (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - home   ♪ Imagine (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - imagine   ♪ River (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - river   ♪ Rose (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - rose   ♪ Travel (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - rose