Editing YOUR Common App Essays until YOU GET IN! | AVOID These 13 College Essay Mistakes!

Want to work with us? Schedule a FREE intro meeting today: https://www.elevated.school/getstarte...! You asked. I delivered. Back at it again with another video where I edit YOUR college essays until you get in. Sit back. Relax. Take notes. Let's begin. Want your essay to be considered for our next video? Email: [email protected] The nicer your message, the higher the likelihood you'll be chosen :) Time Stamps 0:00 Back at it! 1:40 Mistake #1 Don’t Show Problems! Show Solutions Instead! 2:22 Mistake #2 Avoid Repetition Like the Plague 4:40 Mistake #3 Cut Out Unnecessary Dialogue 6:00 Mistake #4 HOW You Lead is Everything 8:35 STEAL This College Essay Trick! 10:10 Mistake #5 Make Your Story Consistent 11:25 Mistake #6 Your Essay Should Get Better Towards the End 13:00 Mistake #7 Are you going above and beyond? 13:57 PLEASE WATCH THIS MAKEOVER 15:40 Mistake #8 Ruthlessly Remove Obvious Statements 16:46 Mistake #9 Less Problem, More Solution 17:10 Mistake #10 Your Essay Isn’t Specific Enough 18:20 Mistake #11 Helpless to Helpful 18:53 Mistake #12 Passive Characters Stink - Be Active Instead! 23:38 Use this College Essay Formula! 25:23 FREE College Essay Masterclass 26:15 Mistake #13 Make This More Than Just One Moment #elevatedschool #collegeessay #commonapp Hi! We're Kevin and Jeffrey, two Yalies who founded the ElevatEd School, a platform dedicated to helping you articulate and express your most authentic self. We teach creative writing, critical thinking, communication skills, applying to college--- you name it! Want to work with us? Visit ► https://www.elevated.school/getstarte...! How to Get Into an Ivy League School in 2024 ►    • How to Get Into the Ivy League   Editing YOUR College Essays ► https://studio.youtube.com/playlist/P... How to Get Into Any School ►    • How to Get Into ANY College   Interviews With Former Students ►   • Interviewing Our Past Students!   ♪ Affogato (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - affogato   ♪ Alone (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - alone   ♪ Branch (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - branch   ♪ Butter (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - butter   ♪ Chocolate (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - chocolate   ♪ Home (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - home   ♪ River (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - river   ♪ Rose (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - rose   ♪ Travel (Prod. by Lukrembo) ► Link :    • lukrembo - rose