How To Fix the Harry Potter BOOKS

Use the code TREE for 51% off World Anvil with the link https://worldanvil.com/?c=mltt Or else try it out for free!! Harry Potter is a hugely successful set of books but also very flawed ones. JK Rowling is both great at ideas but also a bad writer. It's easy to criticise but harder to make that constructive criticism so this analysis videoessay breaks down exactly what needs changing or fixing with Harry Potter writing and the Philosopher's Stone and why even doing this is an important writing exercise. This video is sponsored by World Anvil TIMESTAMPS 00:00:00 Intro 00:05:22 1: CRAFT 00:09:37 Description 00:14:12 2: CHARACTERISATION 00:16:52 my editing skills leave much to be desired 00:19:05 Dudley 00:23:05 Vernon & Petunia 00:31:04 Hagrid 00:36:23 Dumbledore 00:38:47 Draco 00:50:56 Harry 00:57:17 Ron & Hermione 01:07:25 Conclusion 01:10:16 3: THEME 01:13:54 Cruelty 01:24:35 Teaching 01:26:35 (i) Filch 01:28:56 (ii) Hagrid 01:40:17 (iii) Quirrell 01:43:14 (iv) Snape 01:45:40 (v) Dumbledore 01:48:49 Vulnerability 01:53:10 Conclusion 01:55:48 4: WORLDBUILDING 01:59:54 Governors 02:10:44 Other Schools 02:25:24 Squibs 02:29:36 Genetics 02:34:05 Secrecy 02:36:13 Quidditch 02:42:37 Locked Wands 02:48:50 Wild Magic 02:54:42 5: DIVERSITY 02:59:45 Culture 03:04:00 Friends 03:06:20 Gender 03:09:14 6: CONCLUSION MUSIC All lofi beats by Chill Astronaut Jonny Easton - Aurora Nature Healing Society - 432Hz Meditation & Relaxing Alan Ellis - Sea Terms Patreon link:   / mylittlethoughttree   Buymeacoffee link: https://www.buymeacoffee.com/mltt Second channel:    / @thoughtlesstree   Dave's Walks video:    • Cotswold Way Walk – Ep1: Chipping Campden ...   Thankyou to my small thought tree patrons: Alexa Rives, Apple Chip, Ava Erickson, CapoXproductions, Cormac Walsh, Daniel Zafer-Joyce, Eugene, Hailey Hantzen Stapert, Maria Verghelet, Matt Carlson, Paul Wilson, Sam Moore, A Baby Loaf of Tillamook Smoked Medium Cheddar, anonymous_patron, Blackbeard_TX, Britt Caldwell, Darragh, Jeremy Coyle, John McKean, Kevin Alphenaar, Meredith, Stevie G, tim timmy, Ugne Tartilaite, voo csgo, Kevin Alphenaar, A Baby Loaf of Tillamook Smoked Medium Cheddar, tim timmy, Emily Hanser, Jenni, fearz._., valerie blassey, Katina, dev67, Daniel J Coetzer, Darinka Zobenica, Artyskepty, and Antifa Count Duckula #harrypotter #writing #editing