English Teacher Corrects B2 First (FCE) Essay | Correcting Your Papers Episode 1

Pass the B2 First (FCE) writing part I by seeing what an English teacher would change an essay! In this video, I correct a Cambridge B2 First essay to show how this writer can improve her essay writing skills and pass the B2 First Writing part 1. I also give some tips on how to write a perfect B2 first essay. 🤔I'm an English teacher and you can improve your English by seeing how I grade papers! Want me to correct your essay next? Let me know in the comments! 👇 Want to know how to write a B2 First review? 👉   • B2 First (FCE) Writing a Review with teach...   Chapters 00:00 Introduction 00:20 First impressions 00:37 What was the B2 First assignment? 01:27 Reading this B2 First essay for the first time 02:37 Tip 1 for your B2 First Essay 02:59 Making changes to this B2 First Essay 12:10 Cleaning up the essay to reach the word count 15:39 End See the before and after here: 👉 https://1drv.ms/w/s!AncHCqkuNw04gUVR4... Background picture is from Tom from ByteReview (   / bytereview  ) Social media: Instagram 🤳: instagram.com/mrhenriquez_en twitter 🐤: twitter.com/mrhenriquez_en TikTok 🎵: @MrHenriquez_En George Street Shuffle and Intractable by Kevin MacLeod are licenced under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0-licentie. https://creativecommons.org/licenses/... Source: http://incompetech.com/music/royalty-... Artist: http://incompetech.com/