Comparing My Best And Worst Oxford University Essays #2: What Makes A Very Good, First Class Essay?

Hellooo welcome to part 2! If you guys would like to see me rewrite the bad essay, hit that like button - I'm thinking 200 likes and I'll do it asap??? S O C I A L M E D I A ✽ Snapchat: JustALittle_Roo ✽ Twitter: JustALittleRoo ✽ Instagram: Just_a_little_roo ✽ Tiktok: JustALittleRoo .............................................................................................................................. F A Q s ✽ How old are you? 21 ✽ What did you study at Oxford? Archaeology and Anthropology ✽ Which Oxford college were you at? St Peter's College ✽ Where will your Master's be? Cranfield University ✽ What is your Master's in? Forensic Archaeology and Anthropology ✽ Where are you from? Greater Manchester ✽ What do you use to film? Canon EOS 200d & Samsung S7 Edge