My Oxford Personal Statement & Mistakes To Avoid | Ep.4 Oxbridge App. Series

Welcome to the FOURTH episode of my Oxbridge Application Series! 📌 In this episode, I shared my Oxford personal statement and the things I wished I had done with it. Not gonna lie, I am quite embarrassed that 6 months ago I called this "the" best essay I've ever written. However, I take it as a sign that I myself has also grown - not only in my understanding of the topic but also in maturing my perspective and knowledge! Even though I didn't get into Oxford, I want to still share this with you because it is a different style of writing as compared to Cambridge. When I submitted this one, I thought I wouldn't get into Cambridge because of how different and more academic this one seemed. But the result surprised me! I got into Cambridge but not Oxford. This just goes to show that a personal statement isn't everything and our judgement is probably not the most accurate. The application considers YOU as an individual - as a whole! Not just by some 800-words statement of purpose. A few words of warning: if you watch this and think "oh crap she already wrote a pretty good one, how can I top it off if this essay isn't accepted by Oxford" - PLEASE, again, your application is reviewed as a whole and not just by your essay. The point is not to create something more extravagant than this, but to create one that REFLECTS YOU as an individual and as a SCHOLAR! 📩 If you're looking for someone to review your essay, I do offer a personal statement/statement of purpose/or any university admission essay review service (paid). Drop me an email (see below) if you are interested. ___________________________ // related videos 🎥 My Cambridge personal statement |    • My Cambridge MPhil (Masters) Personal Stat...   🎥 Oxbridge Application Playlist |    • 🎓 Oxbridge App. Series   🎥 Cambridge Acceptance Reaction |    • I'M DOING MY MASTERS AT CAMBRIDGE *emotion...   🎥 How I Got Into Cambridge in Bahasa Indonesia |    • DITERIMA MASTER DI CAMBRIDGE... CARANYA GI...   // sources • Personal statement videos from other YouTubers which I found very helpful!    • the personal statement that GOT ME INTO OX...      • Video      • Write a Killer Personal Statement - My Cam...      • How to write a KILLER personal statement!!   (from Jesus College, Oxford Uni) • My course https://www.devstudies.cam.ac.uk/stud... • Collegial system (cambridge) https://www.cam.ac.uk/about-the-unive... // useful links 🔗 • Applying to UK universities?* 🎓 https://bit.ly/viancqaxukec If you’re looking for application support and/or consultation to help you with ALL of the processes needed for studying in the UK, try UKEC - they provide 100% free support if you want to do your A-Level, Foundation, Undergrad, Postgrad, to even PhD in the UK. This is the only agent I vouch for because they have over 130+ universities in their portfolio and Immigration Advisors who are qualified by the UK Home Office (Immigration). • Moving to the UK soon?** 🇬🇧 http://bit.ly/viancqaxmovido You can get your SIM card, transport card, book airport pick-up beforehand! • (INDONESIANS ONLY 🇮🇩) Butuh transfer uang dari Indonesia ke UK (atau negara lain)?** 💸https://transfez.com/?ref=viancqaqkur... Bisa via pakai Transfez app, really easy & quick processing time & fee yang lebih rendah dari bank tradisional! Kalian bisa pakai code aku: VIANCQA untuk free transfer fee di transaksi pertama! // socials @viancqa (  / viancqa  ) @abroadening.id (  / abroadening.id   - this is an initiative for 🇮🇩 Indonesian students that I co-founded! If you're planning to study abroad, I recommend that you check it out) [email protected] ⚠️ *Before you email me with questions about admissions to UK university, try going on Google or the university website to find the answers - most of the information is actually readily available online. I'm always happy to help but you have to do your own research, it's the most important step for anyone interested in studying overseas! // frequently asked questions • Where are you from? I'm born and raised in Indonesia 🇮🇩 but have moved to the UK 🇬🇧 since 2017 to pursue my higher education! • Where did you do your undergrad and what degree? Coventry University, BA in Financial Economics https://bit.ly/3i5D3IB • How did you enter a UK University without A-Level/IB/Foundation? https://bit.ly/2AwEoXY • What is it like interning in the UK as an International student? https://bit.ly/3eHl74R // music Naomi - Polaroids - https://thmatc.co/?l=54FBFBF7 *) When you sign up using my link, I earn a small commission, but the service is still 100% free for you! **) This is an affiliate link and when you use my code, I earn a small commission, but the price is still the same for you 7,333