Screenplay Format: How to write actions that wow. Fixing first draft problems.

❤️ Free online trainings to screenwriters & filmmakers: https://theindependentfilmschool.com/... How to write a movie …that moves? Screenplay format naturally leads to write actions or write descriptions in your screenplay that will leave the reader feeling like they’re watching the movie. In this video, I highlight 6 common mistakes when writing screenplay actions and descriptions. Script formatting is designed to lead you to write actions and descriptions in your scenes that keep readers reading. 🎁 Goody bag of the day: Towards the end of the video I'll edit a badly written screenplay page. Watch me trim it down mercilessly to make the story easier to read, feel, see in one's mind. ------------- WHY THE INDEPENDENT FILM SCHOOL IS YOUR NEW LOVE We build confidence in screenwriters, actors, and filmmakers, at all levels of experience. We do this through skill building, community building, encouragement, and hearty challenges. How did we end up with nearly 50,000 members? Here's how: 💀 No dry, boring gear talk. No pursuits of riches and fame. No bro marketing (or bro anything), though we do love our brothers and welcome you here. No celeb name dropping that leaves people feeling small and thinking someone else out there is cooler than you. They're not. 💔 If you have stories to share that you'd like to see on the screen, and you're excited to do the work, or willing to do the work, or been burned out but will consider dusting your knees and trying again: we're here for you. 📬 Join me here: https://theindependentfilmschool.com/... 🎥 Some of my own movies are here: https://ElaThier.com #writing #screenwriting #screenplay #filmmaking #independentfilmmaker ------------- Chapters: 00:00 - 00:13 ~ Introduction 00:13 - 01:23 ~ Mistake 1: Paragraph length 01:23 - 02:33 ~ Mistake 2: Description madness 02:33 - 04:11 ~ Mistake 3: Clarity 04:11 - 07:19 ~ Mistake 4: Sight & sound - only! 07:19 - 09:06 ~ Mistake 5: Pacing 09:06 - 10:32 ~ Mistake 6: Emphasis 10:32 - 19:25 ~ I demonstrate by editing a page from a screenplay (pro tip added!) 19:25 - 19:47 ~ 🛼 Join me at The Independent Film School #writing #screenwriting #screenplay #filmmaking #independentfilmmaker