I rewrote and voiced the Dragon Age 4 Veilguard non-binary scene to be less "cringe"

Patreon:   / anbeegod   Can a game writer fix the most infamous scene in Dragon Age 4 Veilguard? I rewrote and voiced the Dragon Age 4 Veilguard non-binary scene to be less "cringe", where Taash came out as non-binary to mother. Although I am not really a professional game writer, I had years of experience writing characters in Skyrim mods as a hobby. With my writing experience, I decided to rewrite this infamous scene as an experiment on whether this premise is entirely irredeemable. My ground rules are these: 1. Characters should speak like they belong in the setting 2. Every line should build the character, the world, or the story, or it should not exist 3. Taash being non-binary is not changed, this is the entire premise of this scene 4. Characters should be relatable even if the player does not share their view 5. The dialogues are authentic to the original character design Seems like a colossal undertaking given the infamous personality and dialogues of Taash. But I took the challenge.