📓 editing YOUR stories! // open workshop // edit with me

BIG thank you to all the writers who shared pieces. I was honoured to read your work! sorry I couldn’t get to more but I’ll try my best to do another video in the future, if there’s interest. please be considerate in the comments to fellow writers, etc etc ☀️ ☁️ featured writers 1 bumblebee 2 Adam Fishkin 3 Livy timestamps: 0:00 intro 1:12 important disclaimers 2:16 submission 1 (CW - physical aggression) 3:07 initial thoughts, verb tense, phrasing, colloquialisms 7:38 sensory detail, simplifying, figurative language 13:04 imagery and description 15:55 shifting POV and dialogue rhythm 19:04 submission 2 - tone and form 24:11 submission 3 24:52 openings and spooky vibes 26:47 characterization and relationships 29:40 example edit and character voice 37:30 share your thoughts! _____ more videos: ✨ line-editing my YA fantasy:    • line-editing my YA fantasy book 🌈  charact...   ✨ writer envy and book revisions (vlog):    • 📖 writer envy, part two book revisions & m...   / about / i'm kris (she/her), writer/aspiring author, mostly writing speculative fiction. on this channel i'm documenting my writing process, ongoing projects and general bookish shenanigans ☀️ / where to find me / twitter:   / km_fajardo   instagram:   / krismfajardo   goodreads:   / krismfajardo   storygraph: https://app.thestorygraph.com/profile... podcast:    / @theworkshop816   music: 🎧 A Band Called Yellow - Summer - https://thmatc.co/?l=F0F95372 #authortube #writing