Birds on a Wire

This is my own representation of the short pixar clip, "birds". I recorded all the sounds myself, but there is one part i struggled on, which I think maybe lets the clip down slightly. But its a learning curve, so I will be aiming to improve my latest work. I dont mind feedback, as long as its constructive criticism. Things I can improve on. thanks. :) **ALL SOUND IS COPYRIGHT TO RYAN NUNWICK AND HUDDERSFIELD UNIVERSITY **