common app essay that got me accepted to the ivy league + tips | cornell

here is the common app essay that got me accepted to an ivy league school! i applied ED to cornell along with a bunch of colleges back in 2019 (yes, 2019 before there was chatGPT). i was deferred at first, but was lucky enough to get in after! hopefully, this video helps you guys in some way. if you think it's good, here's some inspiration. if it's bad, now you know what not to do and maybe it'll show you that you don't need a great essay to get into a great school! i'd love to help so if you want me to read your essay and give you some advice, feel free to comment :) you got this!