Editing YOUR Writing pt. 1 | Line Edit With Me #4

Thank you once again to the writers who submitted their wonderful work! Watch part 2 here:    • Editing YOUR Writing pt. 2 | Line Edit Wit...   TIMESTAMPS: 3:42 - Submission 1 - establishing a sense of place, chronology 10:36 - Submission 2 - continuity, imagery 16:09 - Submission 3 - POV, psychic distance, cohesion 22:14 - Submission 4 - opening lines 26:38 - Submission 5 - sentence structure 30:56 - Submission 6 - clarity of image 34:11 - Submission 7 (poem) - line breaks, double meanings 43:01 - Submission 8 - clarity of concept LINKS Writing updates: https://bit.ly/3fOsIAf Blog:   / coffeeandcalligraphy   Twitter (private):   / rachellwrites   Pinterest: http://bit.ly/2qdKsyM Want to read excerpts from my books? Moth Work intro page & writing updates: https://bit.ly/3k31Puu Feeding Habits intro page & writing updates: https://bit.ly/31kBnE7 MY WORK → "The Species is Dead" in Minola Review (short fiction): https://bit.ly/2WVNuXw → "Mama Lives in My Mouth" in Young Voices (flash fiction): https://bit.ly/3m60yDk → "Primary Organs" in The Malahat Review (short fiction - fc. Winter 2020) → "We sell skin on sale" in Augur Magazine (poetry - fc. Winter 2020) → "My Wolf Lives on the Windowsill" in Grain Magazine (poetry): [print only] ABOUT ME Hi y'all! I'm Rachel, a nineteen-year-old writer from Toronto. I've been writing for six years and am in my second year as a writing undergrad. On my channel, I document my writing journey and try to post once a week (usually on Fridays). You can read my work in issue 25 of Minola Review, Grain Magazine, The Malahat Review (fc. Winter 2020), Augur Magazine (fc. Winter 2020), on my blog, and elsewhere! ASK ME ANYTHING: http://bit.ly/2q00dJv Outro: This is not a joke by Monplaisir My equipment: → Vlog camera: iPhone 8 → Fancy camera: Sony ZV1 → Vlog mic: Rode Video Micro → Sit-down mic: Blue Snowball iCE → Editor: Premiere Pro Last video:    • 6 Ways to Combat Writer's Block   #authortube