Would You Try.. Again? (Original dream pop(?) type thing)

Reimagined version, 2026. I cleaned up the mix a great deal and added some new guitars and vocals. This version seems to be much more bearable to listen to. The bass was also slightly out of tune in the original version so I fixed it. Tbh it could go on longer or I can imagine some different sections/ lyrical ideas... must've been going for a repetitive frame to build layers over the simplicity when I wrote it in 2023. Oh yeah.. and on the original version I was just using an sm57 mic near the guitar strings. Plugging it into a thing can definitely help but it produced some interesting/ kind of harsh percussive sounds.. Written, recorded, mixed and mastered by Skitz Metal Choons, 2026. Old version's here... I like the fills in it... reminds me of a 90s radio song.. but it's also a bit uglier:    • Would You Try? - Original Song (Remastered...