なんでダメなの？東大附属 ―不合格になりやすい推薦書―

Thank you for watching. Thank you for watching. 00:00 Greetings and today's topic 01:30 Common mistakes in recommendation letters that often lead to rejection ① 03:13 ① Stops at "inspiration" and lacks "learning" 04:04 ② Too abstract, such as "brightening the surroundings" or "making people smile" 05:01 ③ Focuses on "family wishes" and doesn't show the child's initiative 05:49 ④ Ending with "freedom" or "uninhibited," applicable to any school 07:09 Common mistakes in recommendation letters that often lead to rejection ② 08:26 ① A mere list of facts 09:22 ② Write specifically 10:18 ③ No connection to the school's philosophy 11:23 ④ Issues with writing style and tone Instructor: Ayumu Osawa, Head of Kip Gakushin Cram School You can order the textbook from the link below! https://kipgakushin.thebase.in/ #KipGakushin #SetagayaWardIndividualTutoringSchool #JuniorHighSchoolEntranceExam #HighSchoolEntranceExam #UniversityEntranceExam #ComprehensiveSelectionEntranceExam KipGakushin Tokyo University Affiliated Junior High School Entrance Exam Specialist Course https://www.kipgakushin.com/ikkan.html • Tokyo University Faculty of Education Affiliated Secondary School • Tokyo Junior High School Entrance Exam Situation    • 中学受験はするべき！？【小学生 東京の中学受験事情】   High School Entrance Exams:    • 高校受験   Comprehensive Selection Entrance Exams: Early Starts Offer a Huge Advantage:    • 早めのスタートが圧倒的有利な総合型選抜入試   How to Write a Statement of Purpose: Words to Avoid Using Carelessly:    • 志望理由書の書き方　安易に使わないほうがよい言葉   How Can High School Students from Rural Areas Pass Comprehensive Selection Entrance Exams to Universities in Urban Areas?:    • どうすれば地方の高校生が都会の大学に総合型選抜入試で合格できるのか？   ------------------------------------------------ Kip Gakushin, a private tutoring cram school located in Chitose-Funabashi, Setagaya Ward. This cram school focuses on significantly improving the academic abilities of students preparing for junior high school, high school, and university entrance exams, as well as returnee students, particularly their Japanese language skills. https://www.kipgakushin.com/ TikTok https://www.tiktok.com/@kipgakushin?_... Instagram   / kipgakushin   5-49-3 Sakuragaoka, Setagaya-ku, Tokyo 156-0054, Japan 5-minute walk from Chitose-Funabashi Station on the Odakyu Line TEL: 03-3426-7573 (also FAX)