Tudo sobre a competência 04 da redação do Enem | Corretor, o que você quer de mim?

In the fourth episode of the series "Corrector, what do you want from me?" I'm going to teach you EVERYTHING about competency 4 of the ENEM essay. I know you've heard about cohesion throughout your high school years, but how do you make your essay cohesive? What is cohesion? What are cohesive elements? Stop racking your brains thinking about it and come learn every detail of C4, my love. ✨ 🚨 UNPRECEDENTED PROMOTION FOR THE MODELS AND POINTS COURSE 🚨 http://lumaeponto.com/modelos-yt Cohesion serves to articulate and connect words. To make the connection, we need to use words that connect one piece of information to another, so that the text is clear and fluid. These words that fulfill the function of connecting are very well known by college entrance exam takers as "connectives". Have you heard this word before? But it's worth remembering that the ENEM exam doesn't want you to repeat cohesive elements (connectives), except for "que," "e," and the relative pronouns "este," "esta," "isto," or "esse," "essa," and "isso." Noted? I'm the essay fairy and I'm here to help you get 900+ on the ENEM exam without depending on guessing the topic correctly. Watch the Free Mini-Course on Essay Writing for the ENEM Exam:    • Como aprender redação do zero?   Follow me and receive daily content about ENEM essay writing:   / lumaeponto   Take advantage of the Sample Courses from Modelos e Ponto: https://lumaeponto.com/degustacao/ ENEM essay prompts and tips: http://lumaeponto.com Enroll in the Modelos e Ponto Course: http://lumaeponto.com/modelos-yt Join my Telegram channel: http://bit.ly/canaldaluma Access Lumacast [Spotify's first ENEM essay writing podcast]: http://bit.ly/lumacast