The Huge Mistake You’re Probably Making in Your Novel

WORK WITH ME ON YOUR STORY https://www.alyssamatesic.com/inquire... GET A QUERY LETTER REVIEW https://www.queryacademy.com DOWNLOAD MY FREE STORY SELF-ASSESSMENT! https://www.alyssamatesic.com/#freebi... FOLLOW ME ON MY SOCIALS! Instagram:   / alyssabookeditor   Tiktok:   / alyssamatesic   Twitter:   / alyssamatesic   Once you’ve gotten your story down on the page, it can be extremely difficult to look at your work objectively and determine whether it has the impact you want it to have. In today’s video, I reveal one of the biggest mistakes I see authors make in their book manuscripts so you can recognize and correct it in your own writing. We'll discuss how this mistake typically manifests in a draft of a story and walk through examples of how you might revise the material to have a stronger impact on the reader. MORE WRITING ADVICE: Weak Writing to Banish from Your Manuscript:    • Weak Writing to Banish From Your Manuscript   Top 5 New Writer Mistakes from a PROFESSIONAL BOOK EDITOR:    • Top 5 New Writer Mistakes from a PROFESSIO...   Writing Mistakes to Catch When Self Editing Your Book (with Examples):    • Writing Mistakes to Catch When Self Editin...     ABOUT ME:  My name is Alyssa Matesic, and I’m a professional book editor with nearly a decade of book publishing and editorial experience. Throughout my career, I’ve held editorial roles across both sides of the publishing industry: Big Five publishing houses and literary agencies. The goal of this channel is to help writers throughout the book writing journey—whether you're working on your manuscript or you're looking for publishing advice.   –––––––––––––––––––––––––––––– MUSIC:  Chilling by HoobeZa    • [No Copyright] Chill Lo-Fi Guitar Instrume...   Charlie Brown by Smith The Mister https://smiththemister.bandcamp.com  Smith The Mister https://bit.ly/Smith-The-Mister-YT