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Learn more about my writing program: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c... Download the Editing Guide here, a step-by-step guide to editing your book: https://www.olivialober.com/guia-de-e... Give me 18 minutes and I'll teach you three essential concepts that will transform the quality of your writing: ✅ Show, don't tell – learn to create scenes that make the reader feel instead of just reading information. ✅ Narrative Summary vs. Scene – discover when to summarize and when to delve into details to keep your text engaging. ✅ Pyramid of Abstraction – understand how to balance concrete details and abstraction to make your text vibrant and powerful. If your text seems shallow, expository, or unemotional, this video is for you. If you'd like to have your text read in a video, subscribe to NewsLober; that's where I send the submission form: www.olivialober.com/newsletter Chapters: 00:00 - 00:52 - Introduction 00:53 - 05:43 - Show, Don't Tell 05:43 - 12:00 - Narrative Summary vs. Scene 12:00 - 17:37 - Pyramid of Abstraction 17:37 - 18:33 - Conclusion Hi, my name is Olivia — nice to meet you 🥰 I'm a writer, graduated in Literature, I've worked in the publishing market for over 6 years and I help authors transform their drafts into their dream book, with confidence and autonomy. I created this channel to share practical writing and editing tips. Welcome! My book Physical copy: https://www.amazon.com.br/dp/6500903498 Ebook: https://www.amazon.com.br/dp/B0DGFB3TLZ About my book: https://www.olivialober.com/a-estrela... Connect with me ✨ Contact: [email protected] Website: www.olivialober.com Instagram:   / olivialober   Twitter:   / olivialober   TikTok:   / olivialober   Bluesky: https://bsky.app/profile/olivialober.... Editorial services: https://www.olivialober.com/services-1 Subscribe to this newsletter to receive writing resources: Subscribe to this newsletter to receive the first 10 chapters of my book: https://olivialober.com/#para-leitores-1