【87人公開添削】まずはここから直して。字が汚く見える原因

I apologize if some parts of this explanation are difficult to understand. I would appreciate your understanding this time. ◼︎Project Overview Here↓ →   • 【参加無料】YouTube硬筆展覧会 美文字研究所杯「奇月杯」開催｜登録者記念イベン...   ◼︎Results Announcement Here↓ →   • 【結果発表】87名から選ばれた作品はこちら！| 視聴者全員プレゼントあり | You...   ◼︎For those who want to quickly watch only the parts they're interested in↓ 0:00 Intro 0:58 Introduction 1:25 1. Gordon 3:00 2. Ohto 4:30 3. Kotonoha 5:16 4. Yoshitaka 6:37 5. Sakura Saku 7:51 6. ok 9:09 7. Johnny 10:39 8. Machiko Uzu 11:32 9. Sasaki Ryo 12:30 10. Ryuken 14:21 11. Uguisu 15:32 12. Taya 16:58 13. Wa 18:12 14. Yonejii 19:03 15. Natsuishi 20:00 16. Tacchan 21:57 17. Ota 22:50 18. Gee-kun 23:58 19. Takku 25:05 20. oz 26:04 21. Karaki Utaemon 27:15 22. Yabumoto Seigo 28:43 23. Seyakate Kudo 29:43 [Difference between brush calligraphy and penmanship] Basic concepts of penmanship 33:32 24. Yacchan 34:39 25. Hanadsuchihito 35:42 26. Okan 36:44 27. Yumekome 37:29 28. Shari 38:16 29. Keiko Kaji 39:06 30. Namiki 40:07 31. Kappa no Makko 41:08 32. k-siro 42:31 33. Shige 43:14 34. kh 44:22 35. PN Almakan 45:11 36. Aya 47:34 37. Noriki 48:19 38. Mibun 49:24 39. Nariyama 50:24 40. Yorifune 51:30 41. Sagetsu 52:26 42. Mikarin 53:52 43. Mametanuki 56:09 44. Nanchi 57:02 45. Kaori 58:01 46. Tairacchi 58:36 47. Momoka 59:18 48. Mizuki 1:00:25 49. Chamomile 1:01:33 50. Bambi the Fawn 1:02:28 51. S-ko 1:05:26 52. Akita Komachi 1:06:25 53. Ren 1:07:29 54. Tomo 1:09:02 55. fod0628 1:09:59 56. Nishiyama Shion 1:12:08 57. Nero Family 1:13:27 58. Sakumi 1:14:40 59. Tsubame 1:15:13 60. Hiroyuki 1:16:01 61. Akko 1:17:03 62. Astray 1:17:52 63. Olive 1:18:47 64. Lucky 1:19:57 65. Pontama 1:21:12 66. gen@type-g 1:22:10 67. Iyadomo 1:23:01 68. Meguyan 1:23:57 69. Junko 1:25:22 70. Fudeki 1:26:31 71. Reotan Mito 1:27:17 72. tenco 1:28:18 73. Youka 1:29:06 74. Takashi 1:29:39 [Internal Structure Space] Rationally Unnecessary 1:33:55 75. Marin 1:35:15 76. Miwa 1:36:18 77. moonage_daydream 1:37:56 78. Domi 1:39:02 79. naoyuki1369 1:40:04 80. Makoto 1:42:02 81. Yukika 1:43:31 82. Hamanasu 1:44:58 83. Aya 1:46:10 84. Kazune Yayuyo 1:47:36 85. ihatovo 1:49:05 86. Wang Yongma 1:50:16 87. ??? 1:51:52 In conclusion 1:52:39 Bonus ◼︎Related explanation videos here↓ 【Saturday, Explanation of [正] ~Starting with the basic horizontal lines~ →   • 【解説: 土, 正】横線基礎, ぱっと見で字を上手く見せるにはこれが必要 | リクエ...   Explanation of [大] ~The secrets of rightward and leftward strokes~ →   • 【解説: 大】手本を使った正しい練習方法, 左払いと右払いの書き方, 肝になるのは⚪...   [Rules for writing 口] ~The structural axis of the character and the rationality of the stroke order~ →   • 【超基礎 | ①口のルール】書き順の合理性, 字の構造軸, 縦画先行, 囲みのある字...   Explanation of [草冠] ~How to write characters that tend to extend vertically~ →   • 【書き方解説 : 草冠 + 夢・葬・勇】これで草かんむりの漢字は制覇,  書き方のコ...   [木偏] Explanation of [the character] ~How to insert the pen~ →   • 【解説: 極】ダサくなる木偏の書き方, ペンの入れ方の基礎概念, セクシーな”とめ”...   Explanation of [the character] ~Review of past videos~ →   • 【兵 | 書き方解説】書道界の黄金角度, 字がうまくなったときとは, 線の流れを考え...   Explanation of [the character] ~Things people with messy handwriting should stop doing~ →   • 【解説: 鏡】ペン字初心者・癖字の人が真っ先に止めるべき書き方, 金偏, 立, 儿の...   ◼︎Subchannel here↓ →https://www.youtube.com/channel/@Keyz... ◼︎Penmanship practice item series here↓ [The only practice notebook you need] ~The optimal practice size~ →   • 【練習ノートおすすめ】硬筆ガチ勢が20年以上愛用しているノートはこれ, 〇cmマスが...   [How to choose an underlay] ~Everything you need to know about underlays~ →   • 【下敷きの全て】集中力までUP？絶対買うべき下敷きの効果, 失敗しない選び方, 最適...   ◼︎Discussion about writing instruments and pen pressure here↓ [Part 1 | Introducing what I use] What do I put on my pencil? ~Solving the problem of gripping the pencil too tightly~ →   • 【お悩み解決#2】鉛筆を握り込んでしまう人, 鉛筆装備必須アイテム, 筆記具と筆圧に...   [Part 2 | Complete Explanation] What writing instrument should you practice with? ~The essence of writing pressure~ →   • 【筆圧の本質】ボールペンで練習するな, ペン字の練習に〇〇が最適な理由, 筆記具と筆...   [Part 3 | Individual differences in writing pressure] Which pencil is right for you? ~The essence of handling~ →   • 【ハンドリングの本質】 鉛筆選びは〇〇による, 筆圧の個人差, 鉛筆の太さと選び方,...   [Final Part | Practical Explanation] What are the criteria for choosing a pencil sharpener? ~How to Sharpen a Pencil and Start Writing~ →   • 【鉛筆削りと書き始め方】鉛筆削りの条件2つ, 書き始める前に〇を作る, 筆記具と筆圧...   ◼︎Kigetsu's Favorite Items Here↓ ◻︎Mitsubishi Pencil 2B Pencil →https://amzn.to/4i0ujlK ◻︎Mitsubishi Pencil Sharpener →https://amzn.to/41KA7ce ◻︎Showwa Notebook 8-Square Notebook with Cross-Shaped Guidelines →https://amzn.to/3YDuKuM ◻︎Nakatoshi Sangyo Pencil Grip →https://amzn.to/4b9Rdon ◻︎Tsukuwa Pencil Cap →https://amzn.to/4gJyHEk ◻︎Mitsubishi Pencil Uni Hard-Pen Calligraphy Underlay 1.6mm (Lowest Price First) →https://a.r10.to/h5dcgg →https://a.r10.to/hPvjty →https://a.r10.to/hNeHYk ◻︎Mitsubishi Pencil Uni Calligraphy Underlay 1.4mm →https://amzn.to/4iMggjq ◼︎Items suitable for practicing cursive writing are listed below↓ ◻︎Showwa Notebook 12 lines Includes vertical leader https://amzn.to/43la24i ◼︎Previous explanations are here↓ Explanation of 【福】 ~Basics of writing the radical~ →   • 【お悩み解決#3】示偏は二画目の〇〇でキマる, 偏の書き方の基礎, 福とか神って何で...   Explanation of 【乙】 ~Mastering the fold~ →   • 【解説: 乙】ペン字の超基礎 ”折り返し”編, 「て」の書き方と比較, 筆圧の話 |...   Explanation of 【心】 ~Developing the ability to observe examples~ →   • 【解説: 心】初心者OK, これで全員心は上手く書ける, 真似してはいけない心の書き...   Explanation of 【山】 ~Left The Beauty of Right-Sided As...