Editing Problems I See in Every Short Film

I help editors level up into feature films, TV, and documentaries by cutting the kind of scenes that get them hired: https://www.skool.com/the-go-to-edito... Got a short film or scene you'd like honest feedback on? Submit this form and I may feature it in a future episode: https://forms.gle/oNa25uWJjCrkxCmG6 Experienced Hollywood editor Sven Pape, ACE (aka *This Guy Edits*) who cut for James Cameron on Ghost of the Abyss, worked on the Emmy-winning series Hit Record with Joseph Gordon-Levitt, and has given professional notes to directors like Adam Balo (Telemarketers) delivers raw, no-sugarcoating feedback on a short film by early-stage filmmakers. In this in-depth editing critique, Sven breaks down pacing, shot selection, process-heavy scenes, dramatic tension, and audience engagement with real-time examples and practical tightening suggestions. Perfect for directors, editors, screenwriters, and filmmakers looking to improve their storytelling rhythm and editing instincts. Take my Editor Readiness Check: https://thisguyedits.com/ready Short film title: Finders Fee:    • Finder's Fee   Trevor Meyer and William Sharkey Timestamps 00:00 - Why Most Early Filmmaker Cuts Feel “Off” 01:35 - First Look at the Short Film 03:48 - Major Pacing & Cutting Notes 08:23 - Trimming Process & Business Scenes 14:50 - Dialogue, Performance & Scene Flow Feedback 20:42 - Strongest Moments & Key Improvements 24:10 - Final Thoughts & Overall Assessment Film editing feedback * Short film critique * Filmmaking advice * How to improve pacing * Editing tips for beginners * Professional editor reaction * This Guy Edits