Sasusaku Naruhina school trip doujinshi part 1

its my first doujinshi ever and I worked hard on it....I hope you can read it?..if you can´t....please...tell me that!...It´s a (present) for my best friend mieke and I hope you like it^^ I would be very happy if you write me your opinion...but "please"...be fair because it was the first comic I ever tryed to draw^^ I tryed my best with the english^_^°...I´m german therefore it could be a little bit boring....I hope you like and yeah...thanks for watching...oh and its a sasusaku and naruhina doujinshi no comments like "i hate naruhina" please ...I told you its a sasusak naruhina you know (=! #19 - Most Discussed (This Month) - Film & Animation #84 - Top Favorited (This Month) - Film & Animation #69 - Top Rated (This Month) - Film & Animation #77 - Top Favorited (This Month) - Film & Animation #54 - Top Rated (This Month) - Film & Animation