Critique: S move cuber 8.43 average!

Get your Ao5 critiqued! https://forms.gle/HEoRVvaGQ9uzkveN6 (Accepting until May 31st) 0:00 Solve 1 1:46 Solve 2 4:32 Solve 3 6:09 Solve 4 7:39 Solve 5 8:39 Overall Tips Original video:    • 7.93 + 8.43 avgs + recons   Recons: Scramble 1 (7.44): D' L' D R2 B2 U B' D' R2 U' B2 U2 F2 L2 U B2 L' D2 y2 x // inspection r' U' D R D2 R' // Cross U2' L' U L // F2L 1 y U' R' U R U' R' U' R // F2L 2 U R R' U R U R' U R U' R' // F2L 3 d F R U R' U' F' R U2' R2' F R F' // ZBLS U' R U' R' U' R U R D R' U' R D' R' U2 R' // PLL 58 STM / 7.44 = 7.79 tps (3.69) + (0.71) + (1.13) + (0.50) + (1.30) Scramble 2 (9.72): U2 R' D2 L' F U D2 F U' B2 U2 L F2 L2 D2 R D2 R B2 L2 x2 y // inspection R' F R U' R' U R2 // Pseudocross U R' U' L' U' L // F2L 1 D' U R U2' R' U R U' R' D' // F2L 2 R' D' R U' R' D R U R U' R' // F2L 3 y2 U F R' F' R U S' R U R' S // ZBLS U' U' R U2' R' U' R U R' U2' R' F R2 U' R' U' R u E R' F' U' // ZBLL 66 STM / 9.72 = 6.79 tps (3.76) + (0.50) + (0.94) + (1.56) + (2.87) Scramble 3 (8.74): L2 U2 F U2 R2 F2 U2 F' U2 R2 F' R' F2 R' D' R D' B F2 L' y2 // inspection R' B' U' D R' y L2 U L2' U2 L D' // xcross F' U' F U R U' R' // F2L 2 U U' R' U R U' R' U R L' U2 L // F2L 3 y U2' U2' r U' r' U r U r' R U2' R' // ZBLS U2 R U R2' F' R U2 R U' R' U' R' F R2 U' R' U' // ZBLL 59 STM / 8.74 = 6.75 tps (4.26) + (0.90) + (0.97) + (1.33) + (1.20) Scramble 4 (7.81): F' R2 F' U2 F L2 D2 B2 F' L2 U2 F' D' B L2 U L B' F' R2 F2 y2 // inspection D B' D R F' U L U L' D' // xxcross d' U R U2' R' U2 R U' R' // F2L 3 y' U' U U R R' U' U' R U' R' U2' R U R' U2' R' F R F' // ZBLS U R' U' R F U' R' U' R U F' R' U2' R // ZBLL 50 STM / 7.81 = 6.40 tps (2.53) + (1.80) + (0.80) + (1.40) + (1.17) Scramble 5 (8.74): D' L' B' R2 F2 D B2 D' R2 D' F2 U B' L' R' D2 F' R2 B' z2 // inspection U' R' F L U R B' R' // Cross U' R U2' R' L U' L' // F2L 1 U' L' L U L' U L U R U R' // F2L 2 y L U2 L' // F2L 3 U' U R U2' r' U r U2 r' U' r U R' // ZBLS U2' U F R U R' U' R' F' R U R2 D R' U' R D' R2' U' // ZBLL 61 STM / 8.74 = 6.97 tps (3.86) + (0.93) + (0.84) + (1.16) + (1.87) If you're reading this, comment what you like most about S move cuber's solves